Cuvinte: Cristina Chisilenco
Could you ever imagine a more relaxing place than the seaside? Because I can’t. I’m sitting on the shore and looking at the sea. The sight is breathtakingly.
I don’t know for how long I’ve been sitting here. Hours, days, maybe years… or probably just all night long, and now it seems to be the dawn. The shiny golden disk reflects into the water and gives it a glittery crust. The sea seams calm, even, and sleepy.. It seams like it has just woke up an it is dizzy from the good night sleep.
The sun has set onto the blue, and at thins moment, the sea has turned into a vivid green. It appears to be sprightly and almost happy. The waves seam to have their own competiton, trying to prove each other that they are the fastest and most powerful, so they crush with all their strenght in the rocky edges, but still, careful enogh not to damage the shore.
A few more hours have passed and the sun isn’t so sparkly anymore. As for the sea, the blue has taken over the green, and it lacks brightness. Well, after all those long hours of tight cometition, what would you expect? The waves tire too. Like human beings. A sleepy atmosphere has covered any sign of youth spark..
Now it’s dusk and nothing has changed, and nothing has changed but the position of the sun, at the fact that now it’s twilight…
In the soundless night, the sea has a clear navy blue hue. It is asleep and the surroundings are soundproof. It’s like nothing could everb disturb such silence.
I’m still wandering on the shore and asking myself if anyone could ever imagine a more outstanding view than the seaside…
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